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plagiarism in academia has become a major issue in many countries today. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solution?

#plagiarism #academia #countries
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plagiarism
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feel
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structure
Ensure a clear and structured introduction and conclusion. The introduction should outline the main points you will discuss, and the conclusion should summarize them.
structure
Improve paragraph development. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea and should be clearly connected to the next.
content
Use specific examples and explanations to develop your arguments further, ensuring they directly relate to the question.
content
The essay recognizes the importance of the topic of plagiarism in academia and addresses potential causes.
task response
There is an attempt to provide solutions, which demonstrates a positive effort to fully address the task requirements.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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