The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.

The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016.
The bar chart shows the percentage of global car-sharing usage in 2008 and 2016 for five continents. At first sight, we can divide the continents into two groups: the first band involves North
America
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and Europe, which
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a significant car sharing,
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the second class contains South
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, Australia and Asia, which do not illustrate global
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.
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, more details of the first team, in there exists a considerable peak in 2008 in Europe with around 70% of global
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,
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the dip was in 2008. North
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had the major car
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in 2016,
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the dip was in 2008.
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, a comparison for the second class. It can be seen that in both periods South
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, Australia and Asia had similar behaviour, with the lowest percentage of motor sharing below 10%. In
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team, Asia used cars approximately 6% in 2016,
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South
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had around 4 % in the same year.
To sum up
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, the graphic illustrates the distribution of worldwide global car
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words america, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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