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Band 7.5

Write a letter to a friend.You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1.Apology for damaging the product. 2.Explain what happened. 3.Say how you are going to fix the issue.

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Dear Emy,
Sorry
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 it's taken me so long to write to you but at
last
 I put my pen and paper to explain why I haven't returned that Anatomy
book
 I borrowed from you. To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you.I have to own up that I damaged the
book
 accidentally. I'm so very sorry.I know how important that
book
 is to you as it was passed down from your professor in college. What happened is that
,
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 I had been reading up on the chapter about shoulder complex when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the
book
.Most of the stains
is
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 on the page that were open at the time. I've sent the
book
 away to be repaired.I didn't realise that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be good as new when I get it back next week and
then
 I'll send it on to you. Again, I'm sorry for the delay in telling you.I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes, Paul Surendar.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure there is a logical structure to the paragraphs, as this helps in understanding the flow of ideas.
coherence cohesion
Provide an appropriate greeting and closing to maintain proper letter-writing etiquette.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a focused and singular idea per paragraph to enhance clarity and comprehension.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses the required points of apologizing, explaining, and providing a solution.
task achievement
The tone is suitably informal and friendly, matching the context of a letter to a friend.
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