Write a letter to a friend.You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1.Apology for damaging the product. 2.Explain what happened. 3.Say how you are going to fix the issue.

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Dear Emy,

Sorry

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it's taken me so long to write to you but at

last

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I put my pen and paper to explain why I haven't returned that Anatomy

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I borrowed from you. To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you.I have to own up that I damaged the

book

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accidentally. I'm so very sorry.I know how important that

book

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is to you as it was passed down from your professor in college. What happened is that

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I had been reading up on the chapter about shoulder complex when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the

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.Most of the stains

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on the page that were open at the time. I've sent the

book

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away to be repaired.I didn't realise that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be good as new when I get it back next week and

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I'll send it on to you. Again, I'm sorry for the delay in telling you.I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes, Paul Surendar.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure there is a logical structure to the paragraphs, as this helps in understanding the flow of ideas.

coherence cohesion

Provide an appropriate greeting and closing to maintain proper letter-writing etiquette.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a focused and singular idea per paragraph to enhance clarity and comprehension.

task achievement

The letter effectively addresses the required points of apologizing, explaining, and providing a solution.

task achievement

The tone is suitably informal and friendly, matching the context of a letter to a friend.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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