Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A) Introduce yourself B) Explain what the problem is C) Suggest solutions

Hello sir/madam My name is Manpreet Kaur. I am a nursing student of 2nd year. I live
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eagle plains drive
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Brampton. In my street
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some construction work is going on so I am unable to focus on my studies. My final exams are on next week so it will hinder my academic
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. I know
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construction is for our benefit but there should be a certain timing for that. As it should be starting from 7am to 5 pm so it should not cause any
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community. Thank you Manpreet
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coherence cohesion
Work on structuring your paragraphs with a single clear idea per paragraph. This will enhance readability and coherence.
task achievement
Provide a clearer introduction about yourself, mentioning why the construction affects you can be helpful to strengthen the task response.
task achievement
Your letter has a polite and suitable tone, which is appropriate for writing to a council.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing in your letter are polite and correctly done, setting a respectful tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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