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Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. •In your letter: Give a brief description of the business •Mention what you’d like to be there on the website. •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

#friend #website #business #•in #description #•mention #you’d #•provide #images
Dear
sam
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Sam
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, I am
writting
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writing
you
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to you
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 to develop a website for me. I want you to
developer
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develop
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 a website for my online training program. First of all, add my picture followed by my qualifications. I am a certified exercise and
nutririon
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nutrition
 expert. I completed my certification from NFNA. I have 5+ years of experience training online and offline combined.
Lets
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Let's
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 talk about the packages now. I'll provide monthly,
quartely
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quarterly
,
healf
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half
 yearly and yearly package options. There will be
special
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 discount for
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the fist
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fist
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first
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 30 members. Packages will include complete guidance from personalized workout plans to customized diet plans. There will
also
 be recorded exercise tutorials to help clients perform
expercises
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exercises
 correctly. Clients can record their workout videos and send
to
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them to
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 me for evaluation. Online support will
also
 be available in case of any queries. The next section will show some of my client's
tranformation
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transformation
 pictures.
This
 will show how we achieve results with sheer focus and
descipline
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discipline
. At the bottom of the page include a motivational quote and after that provide the links
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 all my social media platforms including the contact number. Thank you! Gursahab Singh
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coherence cohesion
Work on slightly enhancing the greeting and closing for more personal touch.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent writing tone throughout the letter for a cohesive feel.
task achievement
Clear and detailed description of the business and website requirements.
coherence cohesion
Well-organized paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect.
task achievement
Using practical examples and details to enhance understanding.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • develop a website
  • business description
  • key features
  • user-friendly
  • navigation
  • professional design
  • brand image
  • visual impact
  • high-quality images
  • gallery or slider
  • testimonials
  • case studies
  • content style
  • tone
  • brand's voice
  • target audience
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