Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. In your letter - Describe the situation you are facing - Why you consider it a problem - What changes you would like to recommend
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to request you to solve a problem which is faced by the society in my area. My name is Urvesh Dudhat. I am living in the town hall area.
I am a regular user of the local bus. I am taking a bus every morning to reach at workplace. I am working on Saturday and the frequency is almost an hour between two buses on the weekends, as a result
, I had to leave for my job almost 45 minutes ago to take the bus.
Most people use public transport in their daily routine. This
problem is not only faced by me but also
by others.
I would like to give you some recommendations. If it is possible, you have to reduce the timing
between Replace the word
time
two
buses. Correct article usage
the two
Otherwise
, you have to put some extra buses on the weekends.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope you are taking some action as soon as possible on this
issue.
Yours sincerely,
UrveshSubmitted by pramodv997 on
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Make sure to expand more on why this is a significant problem for the community.
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Improve paragraphing by introducing clear transitions between the problem, its impact, and recommendations.
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Covered all bullet points in the prompt effectively.
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Maintained a polite and formal tone throughout the letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.