Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. In your letter - Describe the situation you are facing - Why you consider it a problem - What changes you would like to recommend

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to request you to solve a problem which is faced by the society in my area. My name is Urvesh Dudhat. I am living in the town hall area. I am a regular user of the local bus. I am taking a bus every morning to reach at workplace. I am working on Saturday and the frequency is almost an hour between two buses on the weekends,

as a result

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, I had to leave for my job almost 45 minutes ago to take the bus. Most people use public transport in their daily routine.

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problem is not only faced by me but

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by others. I would like to give you some recommendations. If it is possible, you have to reduce the

timing

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between

two

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the two

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buses.

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, you have to put some extra buses on the weekends. Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope you are taking some action as soon as possible on

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issue. Yours sincerely, Urvesh

Darshita@8612Tue Nov 05 2024

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Make sure to expand more on why this is a significant problem for the community.

Coherence and Cohesion

Improve paragraphing by introducing clear transitions between the problem, its impact, and recommendations.

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Covered all bullet points in the prompt effectively.

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Maintained a polite and formal tone throughout the letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. In your letter - Describe the situation you are facing - Why you consider it a problem - What changes you would like to recommend

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