In many parts of the world, children's were very different from today. What do you think weather adventages or disadventages of life for children in the past?
Many people believe that in the pre-modern world,
children
's attitudes were significantly different in various parts of the globe compared to Use synonyms
this
contemporary society's Linking Words
children
, as they did not mostly have the chance to engage themselves with the internet. In my opinion, there were both benefits and drawbacks for infants in the past.
On the one hand, leading a life without thinking about the world gave them freedom. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they did not have to have any negative competition with their peers, which is so common among Linking Words
children
now. Use synonyms
Secondly
, there were great facilities to exercise their own cultures and customs among themselves, which are too rare at present, as they mix with their foreign friends and always try to follow them. Linking Words
For instance
, a comparative study was conducted by the University of Dhaka among 1000 students on how much Linking Words
time
usually they spent on social media and on social activities. They found that 57% of students did not spend any Use synonyms
time
in the Use synonyms
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week of 2023, and 41 % of students spent less than 3 hours in a week; Linking Words
however
, 20 years ago, it was 95 % with 15 hours. So, we can say that in Linking Words
this
case, they had shown better responsibility in the past.
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On the other hand
, it is an undeniable fact that today's Linking Words
children
are more meritorious than the previous, as they have the chance to develop their skills within a very short period of Use synonyms
time
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Moreover
, they can do their work from their home, as most of their work is now online. Linking Words
For example
, previously in any circumstances Linking Words
such
as natural calamities, Linking Words
children
would go to schools to learn, but now they can enjoy their studies by staying at home. Use synonyms
In addition
, they do not need to wait to get help from their local peers, as they can take suggestions from any expert international friends.
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To conclude
, there are both merits and demerits of changing infant's attitudes in Linking Words
this
modern world. Linking Words
Although
they are not so aware of their neighbourhood, they are giving more Linking Words
time
to make them more proficient, which will enable us to gain more prosperity.Use synonyms
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