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The table below gives information about the average number of servings of ice cream sold each day in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information about the average number of servings of ice cream sold each day in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram shows the
sales
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 of various refreshments on average in
winter
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 and
summer
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. In general, hot drinks are popular with the public and sold better in
winter
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 than in
summer
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.
On the contrary
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, cool snacks are more favourable for people in a hot season than cold days.
According to
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 the graph, it is noticeable that the best
sales
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 product is hot coffee with probably 75
servings
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 in
winter
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 and the number is about twice as large as in
summer
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 with 30
servings
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.
Moreover
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, regarding iced coffee, the figure is the lowest among any other product with nearly zero, but the
sales
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 can reach 40
servings
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 on hot days. Apart from that,
similarly
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, ice cream is favoured by the masses in
summer
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 with approximately 35 sold and the figure decreases to 25 after the next season.
Besides
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, 50
servings
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 of soup are bought by consumers in
winter
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, and it doubles as many numbers as in
summer
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.
Finally
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, it is worth noting that the
sales
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 of salad are the same whether on cold or warm days.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, winter, summer, servings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number of servings
  • compared to
  • trend
  • increase/decrease in sales
  • consistent pattern
  • seasonal variations
  • notable discrepancies
  • significant differences or similarities
  • external factors
  • consumer preferences
  • economic factors
  • notably higher or lower sales
  • promotions
  • spikes or declines
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