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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
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The chart data gives information about underground rail networks in six major cities. The chart compared in terms of their age, their size and the number of
people
 who use them every year.
It is clear that
 the three oldest
railroad
 systems are larger and
serves
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serve
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 more
people
 than the newer cities. London
railroad
 network is the oldest
system
,
have
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built in 1863. It is
also
 the largest
railroad
system
, with 394
kilometres
 of route. The second largest
system
 is in Paris, it is only about
the
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half of London’s, with 199
kilometres
 of route.
However
, it serves more passengers every year. Tokyo’s
railroad
system
 is in third of them, but it serves the most
people
use
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who use
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 it, with 1927 million
people
. Of the three newer
railroad
 networks, Washington
Dc
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DC
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 has the largest one, with 126
kilometres
 of route,
while
 Kyoto and Los Angeles only have 11
kilometres
 and 28
kilometres
. Los Angeles’
railroad
 is the newest
railroad
system
,
have
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build
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built
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 in 2001.
By contrast
, Kyoto has the smallest
railroad
 network, only
serves
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serving
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 4500 million passengers per year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, railroad, system, kilometres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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