The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the process of generating
electricity
from a type of coal.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that the procedure has 3 main stages, commencing with mining coal, then
treating, and ending with distributing electricity
.
During the first phase, coal is extracted from the mine and crushed into fragments. Then
, the crushed coal is transported to the gasifier, waiting for the next stage. In this
phase, coal will be heated in order to release gas
. Afterwards, the produced gas
is cooled, producing waste heat which will be discarded.
After being cooled down, the gas
will be purified and directed to gas
power plants, which also
release waste heat. Meanwhile, the purified gas
will be converted into electricity
. Finally
, this
electricity
is then
stored and distributed to households and industries, serving for
numerous purposes. The cycle repeats continuously to ensure a consistent supply of Change preposition
apply
electricity
to power appliances and factories.Submitted by elsenglish16992 on
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