The graph below shows how people buy music
The line chart gives information about the percentage of total music
sales
by three methods, namely; streams
, downloads
, and CDs
purchased. The most significant trend is the increase in stream sales
from 2011 to 2018 compared to the other two sales
methods.
In detail, in the year 2011, the highest sales
method was CDs
which was approximately 55% compared to streams
and downloads
which were 5% and 32% respectively. By 2014, both streams
and downloads
increased significantly to reach 15% for stream sales
and 43% for download purchases. While
CDs
decreased dramatically to 35% in the same year. In 2018, CDs
and downloads
went down nearly to the same percentage 30%-28%. In contrast
, stream purchase was the highest by over 40%.
To sum up
, sales
of streams
was
the lowest purchased method in the given period Change the verb form
were
however
it became the highest at the end
to reach over 40% while
other methods were less than this
percentage.Submitted by a.almakmari93 on
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