The graph below shows how people buy music
The line chart gives information about the percentage of total music
sales
by three methods, namely; Use synonyms
streams
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downloads
, and Use synonyms
CDs
purchased. The most significant trend is the increase in stream Use synonyms
sales
from 2011 to 2018 compared to the other two Use synonyms
sales
methods.
In detail, in the year 2011, the highest Use synonyms
sales
method was Use synonyms
CDs
which was approximately 55% compared to Use synonyms
streams
and Use synonyms
downloads
which were 5% and 32% respectively. By 2014, both Use synonyms
streams
and Use synonyms
downloads
increased significantly to reach 15% for stream Use synonyms
sales
and 43% for download purchases. Use synonyms
While
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CDs
decreased dramatically to 35% in the same year. In 2018, Use synonyms
CDs
and Use synonyms
downloads
went down nearly to the same percentage 30%-28%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, stream purchase was the highest by over 40%.
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To sum up
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sales
of Use synonyms
streams
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was
the lowest purchased method in the given period Change the verb form
were
however
it became the highest Linking Words
at the end
to reach over 40% Linking Words
while
other methods were less than Linking Words
this
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