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debate over whether cosmetic
surgery
should be
for
people
seeking
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better
. Some believe that a fabulous look will
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people
's confidence and is valuable in job hunting and
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.
While
others argue that natural
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is more meaningful and
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should
generating fake faces that
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to high-tech
surgery
. In my view, cosmetic
surgery
has advantages in improving
people
's physical
and gaining confidence,
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also
has drawbacks
such
as high cost and risks in its complications.
The most important
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for
seeking
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cosmetic
surgery
is to improve their physical look. In today's job market, many
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such
as sales,
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require
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look. Models or
even desire
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facial
as a
part of their work.
Moreover
,
people
relayCorrect your spelling
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on
surgery
to turn back to a young face. A youthful face is
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an even
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of muscles,
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and fatty tissue.
Whereas
during
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, the skin becomes drier, sagging and less elastic.
Therefore
, elderly
people
seek
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surgery
to revitalize their
so as to rebuild their confidence.
The increasing trend for
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seeking
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rejuvenence
surgery
is beneficial in boosting the economy and increasing tax revenue for the government and the hospitals. As
surgery
-related procedures are usually not
by insurance and are relatively
.
Therefore
, it becomes a valuable source to promote GDP growth.
In addition
, as more investment will be allocated to
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, it will motivate creativity and
innovation.
On the flip side, some opponents
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that over
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on
surgery
gives
people
fake looks. We could not enjoy the natural
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elegancy as seen in
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by both the young and the old.
Moreover
, as more and more merchants
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profit from the market, many illegal operations have been carried out without proper training.
This
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to
complications
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society as a whole.
In summary, it is undeniable that
surgery
brings both economic
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and sociological improvement
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society.
However
, it poses challenges in
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of
the standard
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surgery
and reducing the complications for patients. Striking the balance between the quality of the
surgery
and the outcome of the patients is crucial to
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people
's
overall
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.