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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.
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The bar diagram illustrates the proportion of the total world citizens in
India
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,
China
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,
Japan
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, and the USA in the years 1950 and 2003
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 and future predictions for 2050.
Overall
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,
India
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 showed an increasing rate of
population
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,
whereas
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 the other four countries displayed a decreasing rate of individuals.
Although
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 the USA predicted their future
population
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 size would be stabilized;
however
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,
China
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 and
Japan
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 showed a decreasing trend,
while
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India
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 demonstrated the opposite results of
Japan
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 and
China
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. In 1950,
India
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 contributed 15% of the world's total
population
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 and it became around 17% in the year 2003; by the way, they are predicting it will be nearly 20 percent in 2050.
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China
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 was the highest contributor approximately 24 percent in 1950, it became 20 percent after 53 years and they are projecting, it will be at 15% in 2050. The United States
population
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 was around 7% of the total world's citizens,
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 it came down to 5 per cent in 2003, and will be stable in the next 50 years.
On the other hand
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Japan
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 made the lowest contribution among the 4 countries, it was around 4% in 1950, 3% in 2003, and will fall near 1% in 2050.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, japan, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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