The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the

total world population in 4 countries in 1950

and 2003, and projections for 2050.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar diagram illustrates the proportion of the total world citizens in
India
,
China
,
Japan
, and the USA in the years 1950 and 2003
,
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and future predictions for 2050.
Overall
,
India
showed an increasing rate of
population
,
whereas
the other four countries displayed a decreasing rate of individuals.
Although
the USA predicted their future
population
size would be stabilized;
however
,
China
and
Japan
showed a decreasing trend,
while
India
demonstrated the opposite results of
Japan
and
China
. In 1950,
India
contributed 15% of the world's total
population
and it became around 17% in the year 2003; by the way, they are predicting it will be nearly 20 percent in 2050.
Although
China
was the highest contributor approximately 24 percent in 1950, it became 20 percent after 53 years and they are projecting, it will be at 15% in 2050. The United States
population
was around 7% of the total world's citizens,
while
it came down to 5 per cent in 2003, and will be stable in the next 50 years.
On the other hand
,
Japan
made the lowest contribution among the 4 countries, it was around 4% in 1950, 3% in 2003, and will fall near 1% in 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, japan, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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