The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map describes the plan of a museum in the year 1998 and after modification Which was held in the year of 2008.
overall
, in 2008 the museum updated its features including a restaurant and
garden
Firstly
, in 1908 and 2008, -the position of the
garden
, the cafe, and the ticket entrance or exit were exactly in Same.
Moreover
, permanent exhibition rooms remained unchanged.
Secondly
, the
garden
was located Same place in both 1998 and 20b8,
however
, the internal decoration of the
garden
in changed.
Additionally
, in 2008 the
garden
had more two modifications which were the cafe sitting area and fountain which were missing in 1998.
Moreover
, the shop, the WC, Bags, and coats were not in a similar Place that was shown in the 1998 map. The Shop remained near the ticket entrance or exit in both years but il exchanged their position which was right to left. Again, the WC took place on the upper Side of the map just close to the cafe in 2008.
Also
, the Bags and coats replaced the temporary exhibition room in 2008 and placed on top of the bags and coats.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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