The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate information on the current places and various
dance
classes attended by the adolescent proportion of a city in Australia. The pie chart shows locations and distribution in percentages, and different
dance
courses are shown in a bar chart with numbers between 0 to 700.
Overall
,
It is clear that
private studios have the highest share of the
dance
market with nearly 50%, and the majority of participants in all types of
dance
are under 11
years
old, except for the modern courses where the number of 11 to 16
years
old is higher. Regarding the location, private studios were the top priority with 50%, followed by school halls, mainly held after school, community halls, and others with 24% and 18%, respectively. Meanwhile, studios owned by colleges had only a 10% share of the total. On the other side, analyzing types revealed that approximately 600 participants under the age of 11 were recorded.
In contrast
, in the modern course, the number was a bit lower, with nearly 520 individuals above 11 to 16
years
old.
According to
tap
dance
, the quantity in both categories was slightly the same, 11 to 16
years
with 420 and under the age of 11 with a bit higher number of participants by approximately 450.
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  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
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  • trends
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