Advanced technologies have made human life more comfortable.There are advantages and disadvantges to human beings.Describe the pros and cons.
Nowadays,
technologies
have developed rapidly including artificial intelligence have increasingly become part of human life which is unavoidable.Thus
,there is an inconclusive debate as to whether these changes are beneficial or not.In the following paragraphs,the benefits and drawbacks will be discussed in detail.
To begin
with,Technologies
can do numerous things that people
require a lot of time and effort to do.Thus
,Most of the labour works have now been replaced by these because of their economic and convenience resulting in thousands of people
losing their jobs.Workers have to achieve more expertise and skills to compete with robots.Additionally
,since the development of artificial intelligence,individuals have relied on these more than they should be and these technologies
can be utilized in mischievous ways.For instance
,Schools give assignments to students in order for them to learn however
,some students use these technologies
to do their homework instead
.By doing this
,they will lack patience and will not obtain any knowledge.
On the other hand
,technologies
can have abundant advantages.Many things that seemed impossible in the past can be done effortlessly today in many aspects such
as communication,medication and transportation.That is
to say,human life expectancy is longer than before.Many diseases which were hazardous in the past we find a treatable way now.People
can access others in any part of the world making business easier.Also
,Traveling and exploring other countries are more practical resulting in globalization.
In conclusion,the advancement of technologies
has both pros and cons, yet their developments are unavoidable.People
who find ways to adapt and benefit from them will be more advantageous in the long term.Submitted by chawanat.pla on
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task achievement
Enhance the variety and relevance of specific examples to strengthen arguments.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next for better flow.
coherence cohesion
Good organization with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
task achievement
Addresses both advantages and disadvantages of technology effectively.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...