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​​ Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do

#landlord #noise #block #flats
Dear Sir, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
 to express my disappointment regarding
noise
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the noise
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 coming from your flat number 10. My name is Monali
joshi
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Joshi
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. I
am
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have been
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 living in your apartment
since
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for
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 5 years which is located on
main
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the main
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 street. My unit number is 11.
Besides
 to your flat. I would like to tell you about the current problem
causing
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caused
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 by some.
Firstly
, those who
lives
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live
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 in your apartment,
they
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apply
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have
been
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always
organise
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organising
organised
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 social gatherings in order to spend their time with their friends.
Secondly
, they play and sing songs loudly till
mid night
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midnight
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 and because of that I can not able to sleep and it will ruin my next day.
Therefore
, I would like to suggest
you
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apply
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that you
can
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apply
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make stringent rules about not
make
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making
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 any noise after 11 PM . Because it is very strenuous for me to survive in
this
 kind of noisy environment. I look forward to your kind response. Yours sincerely, Monali
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single distinct idea to improve clarity and coherence.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking up longer sentences to make the content easier to read.
task achievement
The tone can be more formal since this is a complaint letter. Consider using more formal language choices.
task achievement
The letter clearly specifies the location and nature of the problem, providing a detailed explanation.
greeting and closing
The closure is polite and anticipates a response, which is suitable for a formal letter.
logical structure
The letter maintains clarity in stating the issue and the requested action for resolution.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaint
  • tenant
  • landlord
  • block of flats
  • disturbance
  • noise pollution
  • soundproofing
  • regulations
  • inconvenience
  • reside
  • address
  • issue
  • resolve
  • assurance
  • promptly
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