You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Raam,
I hope
your
well, I'm writing Replace the word
you're
you are
this
letter about
Change preposition
to
drive
learning advice.
Correct your spelling
give
Firstly
, I'v
to inform Correct your spelling
I've
about
driving Correct pronoun usage
you about
advantage
. nowadays driving is Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
a
one of Change the article
apply
Correct article usage
the advance
advance
skills for all Replace the word
advanced
of
Change preposition
apply
people
because everyone Add an article
the people
use
Change the verb form
uses
own
Correct pronoun usage
their own
vehile
Correct your spelling
vehicle
while
some counrty
call for Correct your spelling
country
driving
Correct article usage
a driving
vacancy
too. Fix the agreement mistake
vacancies
therfore
, many driving licence Correct your spelling
Therefore
holder
can get Fix the agreement mistake
holders
vacancy
and Fix the agreement mistake
vacancies
salary
. who can grow Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
advance
life zone.
Replace the word
advanced
Secondly
, you asked one
of Change preposition
for one
best
driving licence school Correct article usage
the best
name
. I know one of Fix the agreement mistake
names
driving
Correct article usage
the driving
school
is Fix the agreement mistake
schools
best
in our city. Correct article usage
the best
thatb
Correct your spelling
that
is name
Driving school. It is Change the verb form
is named
is naming
locaded
. Batharamulla,Colombo -05. They are doing best driving cough. when we register in Correct your spelling
located
loaded
this
institute they can do well driving
training Add a hyphen
well-driving
begining
to advance.
they will pick our home Correct your spelling
beginning
to
Change preposition
as
there
Correct your spelling
their
traing
place.
Correct your spelling
training
Lastly
, If you drive the vehel
you have to follow Correct your spelling
vehicle
feel
focous
drive and Correct your spelling
focus
sefty
. because it is very important for our life. most Correct your spelling
safety
of
Change preposition
apply
accident
will Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
held
. so Change the verb form
be held
hold
ou
have to consider Correct your spelling
you
about
it.
Best of Luck
SaamChange preposition
apply
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to structure your paragraphs to focus on one idea each, which will improve coherence and cohesion.
Task Achievement
Check for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance the clarity of your letter.
Task Achievement
You've included all the required elements: advantages of a driving license, recommending a driving school, and giving additional guidance.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formatted for a friendly letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,