The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The bar chart illustrates the
expenditure
on six consumer goods in four European countries: Germany, Italy, France, and Britain
.
Overall
, it is noteworthy that the majority of spending occurred in Britain
, while
Germany recorded the lowest expenditure
across all categories.
According to
the chart, Britain
spent the highest amount on photographic film
, which accounted for approximately £170,000. Additionally
, Britain
spent over £160,000 on toys
and CDs, surpassing the other countries. Interestingly, spending on tennis racquets and personal stereos in Britain
was equal; however
, this
spending remained lower than that on perfumes.
In France, the expenditure
on toys
and CDs was equal, with only a slight difference in spending on perfumes, tennis racquets, and personal stereos. Photographic film
was the top category for spending in France, exceeding £160,000.
As for Germany, the expenditure
on CDs, perfumes, and tennis racquets was around £155,000, while
personal stereos recorded only £150,000. Their spending on toys
and photographic film
was almost similar.
In Italy, spending ranged around £150,000 to £155,000, except for toys
and photographic film
, where the figures were slightly higher.Submitted by esaraica on
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