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Topic-Task 1; Topic;A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, 1)Thank him/her for the invitation. 2)Explain why you cannot come. 3) Ask him/her about other times to visit.

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Dear Paritosh, I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to thank you for your kind invitation .
However
, I am afraid my current schedule won’t allow me to visit your place. As you know
that
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I have recently started my dream job , and I have to work around the clock on an important assignment assigned by my manager. I’m leading a small team on
this
 project by which I can gain experience and boost my career in
this
 company. I have to put all my time into
this
 assignment and do not want to leave any crumbs to seal the deal. I can’t explain how terrible I feel to say no to you, but I can compensate and promise to visit you during fall break and we can
also
 plan a trip to
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the blue
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blue mountains
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Blue Mountains
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 as old days . Please let me know if you have any other plans during that time. Yours Lovingly, Parthvi
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea, improving the clarity of the message.
Task Achievement
Be sure to provide a varied and contextually appropriate vocabulary for even higher effectiveness.
Greeting and Closing
The letter opens with a warm greeting and closes with a friendly farewell, maintaining an excellent tone throughout.
Logical Structure
The explanation for not being able to accept the invitation is clear and logically organized, enhancing the letter's coherence.
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