The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The given diagram illustrates the procedure of how
plastic
bottles of recycled.
Overall
, as can be seen, it is a complex process which requires a range of machinery and equipment and at some stages
skilled
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workers. Looking more closely at the recycling process,
it is clear that
,
initially
, bottles are separated and collected in
recycle
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bins.
Then
they should be sent to recycling centers using trucks. After they are sorted by workforce, they will be compressed into the form of square blocks. After that, they will be crushed with two gears, and they will enter a pool to be washed.
Then
they pass through a special device to produce
plastic
pellets.
Next,
by heating them, raw material will be formed. Before producing end products, they are bagged.
This
raw material will be used whether in
plastic
items
such
as bottles and containers or other items in which
plastic
is one of their materials
such
as pencells, bags, and cloth, and humans can use them again. When they are out of
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the run
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run
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,
this
cycle starts a
new
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new one
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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