The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

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amount
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number

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of citizens from 5 European nationalities residing in each
others
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other's

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countries in the year 2011. The column of the table
show
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shows

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the amount of people living in the different countries and the rows represent the countries where they are living
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,
Germany
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has the
most
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highest

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number of immigrants
totaling
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totalling

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at
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1,198,000 million
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Poland has the lowest with only a total of 6000.
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, Poland has the highest count for
emmigrants
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immigrants
emigrants
migrants

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reaching a total of 1,168,000 million and Spain has the least with only 202,107 thousand. In
Germany
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, most of its immigrants are from Italy
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most of its residents
emmigrate
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emigrate
emigrated
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to Britain.
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, Polish resident's chosen country for immigration is
aslo
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also

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Britain.
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, most of its migrants are from
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. British people's top country for immigrating is Spain
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Germany
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is more popular among Spanish citizens.
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, residents of Italy are high in numbers in Poland and are low in
Germany
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. Britain
however
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have
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has

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the least numbers
in
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for

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both nationalities.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words germany with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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