The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.

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The chart presents the

amount

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of citizens from 5 European nationalities residing in each

others

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countries in the year 2011. The column of the table

show

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the amount of people living in the different countries and the rows represent the countries where they are living

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Overall

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Germany

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has the

most

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number of immigrants

totaling

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1,198,000 million

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Poland has the lowest with only a total of 6000.

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, Poland has the highest count for

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immigrants

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reaching a total of 1,168,000 million and Spain has the least with only 202,107 thousand. In

Germany

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, most of its immigrants are from Italy

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most of its residents

emmigrate

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emigrate

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to Britain.

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, Polish resident's chosen country for immigration is

aslo

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also

Britain.

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, most of its migrants are from

Germany

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. British people's top country for immigrating is Spain

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Germany

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is more popular among Spanish citizens.

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, residents of Italy are high in numbers in Poland and are low in

Germany

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. Britain

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have

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the least numbers

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for

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both nationalities.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

167 words

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