the chart below shows the number of men and woman in further education in britian in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE
AMOUNT
OF MALES AND FEMALES ENGAGED IN PART-TIME AND FULL-TIME Change the quantifier
NUMBER
EDUCATION
IN THE GREAT BRITAIN ENCOMPASSING THE Use synonyms
YEARS
1970/71, 1980/81 AND 1990/91.
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OVERALL
, THE PART-TIME LEARNING SURPASSED THE FULL-TIME TRAINING IN BOTH GENDERS THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN Linking Words
YEARS
. NOTICEABLY , FULL-TIME INSTRUCTIONS GRADUALLY INCREASED IN MALES AND FEMALES IN THE FOLLOWING Use synonyms
YEARS
. BY THE END OF THE Use synonyms
YEARS
, THE FEMALE COUNTERPART DOMINATED THE OTHER IN PART-TIME Use synonyms
EDUCATION
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LOOKING AT THE GRAPH, IN 1970/71, THE WOMEN STOOD AT AROUND 700 AND MEN AT 1000 IN PART-TIME Use synonyms
EDUCATION
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FURTHERMORE
, THE PART-TIME Linking Words
EDUCATION
SLIGHTLY DECREASED TO 850 IN 1980/81 AND INCREASED TO 900 IN 1990/91. Use synonyms
WHEREAS
, THE FEMALES EMBARKED THEIR Linking Words
EDUCATION
AND SURGED FROM 800 TO 110 IN 1980/81 TO 1990/91, RESPECTIVELY.
IT IS CLEAR FROM THE FIGURE, Use synonyms
HOWEVER
, THE FULL-TIME ACADEMICS STARTED BELOW 200 IN BOTH IDENTITIES IN 1970/71, BEFORE RISING TO ABOVE 200 IN 1990/91. IN 1980/81, EITHER OF THE IDENTITY ROSE TO 150 MALES AND 200.Linking Words
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