You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The map compares three potential areas for making a leisure centre. The first ,A, is located in the east, the
second,B
, in the centre, and the third ,C, in the west of the map.
According to
the picture, there are three potential sites for the leisure centre. The A place is near a big factory. The air
due to
the factory is polluted and might affect future customers.
Additionally
, there are fewer trees around the location.
On the other hand
, it is close to a main road and it is near a river which could be considered a positive point because it makes better
accessibility
. The B location is near the housing area which makes better
accessibility
for the residents. It
also
is near the main road
and
Correct word choice
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have
Correct subject-verb agreement
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a
Change the article
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best
accessibility
.
In contrast
, the C is far away from the main road which makes the harder
accessibility
. It is noticeable that the C has the best climate and it is surrounded by trees.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words accessibility with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • situated
  • countryside
  • town centre
  • highly accessible
  • residents
  • ample space
  • crowded
  • noisy
  • industrial area
  • balance
  • accessibility
  • pollution
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