Sociologists opine that social networking websites can have a negative impact on society as they can be used to spread false information. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no denying the fact that social networks can have
impact
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on society.
While
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it is a commonly held belief that social media can have a negative impact on people they use it and spread
falsse
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false

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information
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. There is
also
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an argument that opposes it.
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opinion,
i
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I

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consider that social network websites
are have
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have

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to
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two

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sides first one is
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positive

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and the other one is negative. To
beging
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begin

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with, social network websites
is
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are

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a big world
we
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where we

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can
found
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find

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right
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the right

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information
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and
also
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thier is
rong
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wrong

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information
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In other words
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, we can
found
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find

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new
information
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about
any thing
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anything

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we
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are intrestied

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intrestied
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interested

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on
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in

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it there is not a big
sluotion
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loss

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if we learn new
thing
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things

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from
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the internet
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the internet

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internet
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Internet
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if is not impact
on
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apply

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our
hailth
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health

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.
For example
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, old people take all
whatsapp
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WhatsApp

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massige
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messages

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on
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in

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a serioues
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a serioues

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serioues
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serious
way. Another point to consider,
it
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is it

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is very wrong to take all internet
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and believe it, if we believe it
well
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will

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spread all
this
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false
information
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on
socitety
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society

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and it
well
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will

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make
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makes

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a big
proplem
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problem

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first,
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disesse
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disease

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will increase because they
independad
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independent

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on
wabsit
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website

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information
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. It is
also
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possible to say that,
pepole
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people

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are
independ
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independent

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on social
mida
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media

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they believe
any thing
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anything

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,
for instance
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, they take
druge
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drugs

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if they see post spiking about it. In
conclustion
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conclusion

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, despite people having
diffrent
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different

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view
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views

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,
i
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I

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believe that there is a lot of
information
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on websites but we should
to
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apply

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ask our
doktor
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doctor

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frist
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first

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if we read
information
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about
halith
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health

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and we need to
donot
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do not

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believe all
information
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coherence and cohesion
Work on structuring your essay into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single main idea. This will help improve logical flow and clarity.
task achievement
Aim to provide specific examples to support your points. This will make your argument stronger and more convincing.
language
Proofread your essay to fix spelling and grammatical errors. This will enhance overall readability and professionalism.
task achievement
Make sure to directly address the question in your conclusion, summarizing your main points and stating your final position clearly.
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Good attempt at discussing both sides of the argument.
coherence and cohesion
The essay has both an introduction and a conclusion, which is important for structure.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Misinformation
  • Proliferation
  • Skew public opinion
  • Fact-checking
  • Authenticity
  • Misleading information
  • Regulation
  • Accountability
  • Media literacy
  • User discernment
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