Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2
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The map shows two proposed different sites for building a shopping mall. The
city
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planners must choose only one of the places.
Overall
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, each choice has different features. The first one,S1, has better access to the
railway
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, the river, and housing areas,
while
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the other one,S2, is linked to the main road, and
railway
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. The S1 is located almost north of the
city
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which is surrounded by the river, the main road, and the
railway
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. The main road is above the site, and the
railway
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and the river are on the top left, and on the right respectively.
Additionally
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, the house areas are really near S1 and have great access. It is in the top left of the first site.
In contrast
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, S2 is located in the south of the
city
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. It will have access to two different streets. It is not far away from the
city
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centre, but it is a long distance from residential areas.
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, there is an industrial state near the S2.
Moreover
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, both sites are almost the same distance from the park.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • main road
  • benefits
  • convenience
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • workers
  • compare
  • differences
  • pros and cons
  • suitable
  • analysis
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