The graph below shows the number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart gives information about the figures of citizens participating in a wildlife survey in Britain between the years 2001 and 2009.
According to
the data presented, the total
number
of people in 2009 was the highest,
whereas
, in 2001, the total was the lowest.
Additionally
, in 2001, adults were three times more than adolescents, with 36000 compared to 12000 respectively, which led to a total of 48000. After 2 years, in 2003, the
number
of residents amazingly increased, the total 248000, and the adults were nowhere near as astronomical as the children (212000 and 36000 in order).
Furthermore
, after the other 2 years in 2005, the
number
of grown individuals grew to 332000,
while
, the
number
of youngsters was reduced to 32000 which the whole
number
is 364000.
In addition
, in 2007, the 2 groups just decreased by 1thousand on 2 sides, the total is 362000.
Finally
, in 2009, the
number
of adults had fallen to 270000 residents,
in contrast
, the
number
of minors had formidably boosted as the figures of grown citizens, which led to a total of 540000.
To sum up
, both age groups had massively excessed from 2001
unti
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until
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