The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
The line graph illustrates how much money (
Yen
) is
earned on average in one month between 1953 and 1983, and the prices of black and white Wrong verb form
was
televisions
and colour televisions
at the same time.
Overall
, the costs of colour televisions
and black and white televisions
decreased over time, while
the monthly average salary increased over the period of time.
In 1953, the price
of a black and white television was 110 thousand
Yen
, whereas
the monthly salary was just below 20 thousand
Yen
. After that, in the next 10 years, the price
of black and white televisions
significantly dropped and reached 40 thousand
Yen
just before 1963 and that price
continued to decline slightly until 1983, when it was around 25000 Yen
in 1973 and 20 thousand
Yen
in the year 1983 respectively, which is around five times lower in its initial level. The colour
Correct article usage
Colour
televisions
started their journey nearly 1963, when their price
was 100 thousand
Yen
, however
, their price
also
fell dramatically in the next 30 years, when they showed around 67 thousand
Yen
in 1968, 55 thousand
in 1975, and just below 50 thousand
in the year 1963, which is almost half of its primary level. On the other hand
, the average rose slowly until 1970, when it was approximately 22 thousand
Yen
, then
increased slightly above 32 thousand
in 1976, later escalated considerably in 1963 and reached around 67 thousand
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