A lot of places in the word rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern word. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

In many parts of the world tourism significantly depends as the main revenue,

although

, if not controlled appropriately, it can lead to numerous

of

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problems. Tourism can be

benefitial

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beneficial

to local

business

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businesses

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, but

on the other hand

negatively

affect

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countries

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countries'

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values.

This

essay will prove that the advantages are

grater

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greater

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than the

disatvantages

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disadvantages

.

To begin

, tourists bring more success and customers for the visiting

countries

enterprises. When

traveling

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, people are drawn to the nation's food or costume culture,

therefore

wanting to get an unforgettable experience by spending their money on them. Tourists always choose the most popular and traditional places to visit,

that

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is why they make

the

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main income

to

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these retailers.

For example

,

souvenier

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souvenir

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shops significantly

relay

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rely

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on foreign

travelers

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travellers

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and traditional

resturants

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restaurants

are full

with

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them

also

.

As a result

, these people play a major role in various small business

income

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incomes

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.

However

, the downside

for

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this

is the

visitors

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negative impact on the

countries

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culture and citizens. It is not uncommon for many

number of

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travellers not to be educated enough about their destination rules and beliefs. Most of the

times

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people are not familiar with the fact that other cultures have

differnet

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different

etiquette and laws from

them

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theirs

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. In Rome,

for instance

, it is

obligated

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to be fully covered by clothes in churches, but ,

unfortuantely

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unfortunately

, most of the visitors do not follow these rules. In the outcome, they disrespect the

countries

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regulations and the community. In conclusion, regarding the discussed arguments, the benefits outweigh

its

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disatvantages

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disadvantages

. Even if tourists sometimes act rebelliously

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bad

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manner, they provide significant pluses to local businesses as

the

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primary income.