The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdom, Sweden, Italy and portugal between 1957 and 2007
The maps
shows
the Change the verb form
show
place
of bookstore
in 2000 and now.
These changes in the Add an article
a bookstore
the bookstore
bookstore
for 24 years show how the places
inside have changed, and which places
have been added to the bookstore
.
In 2000 the fiction books
place
was the largest place
in bookstore
which is located at Add an article
the bookstore
a bookstore
top
of the map and to the left corner.Correct article usage
the top
While
the Art,Hobbies and Cookery bookcases had
located in the middle of the Verb problem
were
bookstore
.The travel books
,New books
and service desk area
had been located nearby
to the entrance.Now the fiction Correct your spelling
near
books
area
became
smaller and Wrong verb form
has become
instead
of those places
we can see the art,hobbies and cookery books
places
,and the non-fiction area
had
been replaced Wrong verb form
has
instead
of fiction
Correct article usage
the fiction
area
to the corner.There is a new cafe instead
of non-fiction
Correct article usage
a non-fiction
books
place
and their tables in the middle of bookstore
Correct article usage
the bookstore
instead
of bookcases of art,hobbies and cookery .While
the places
of the travel books
,new books
and service desk stayed in their
same Change the word
the
places
.
In conclusion, Over these last
24 years,places
in bookstore
have changed and some Fix the agreement mistake
bookstores
places
had been
remained in the same Wrong verb form
have
place
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words place, bookstore, places, books, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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