The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts illustrate the opinions of Bowen Island accumulated by
visitors
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of
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apply
it
, which are divided into positive and negative opinions.
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apply
Overall
, the most skeptical opinion about Bowen Island was Linking Words
high
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the high
cost
of living which relatively accounts Use synonyms
over
two times than other categories. Change preposition
for over
Secondly
, the most positive opinion was about the citizens of Bowen Island and the scenery.
To describe in more detail, 50% of Linking Words
visitors
surveyed that Use synonyms
high
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the high
cost
of living was Use synonyms
bad
factor for their stay. And the second biggest disadvantage was entertainment which records 25% of all surveys. And food quality and weather follow after, with respectively 10% and 15%. The complaint about four factors except Add an article
a bad
high
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the high
cost
of living Use synonyms
are
relatively smaller than Change the verb form
is
high
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the high
cost
of living.
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In contrast
, 42% of Linking Words
visitors
answered that the people were good Use synonyms
to enjoy
their travel. And Change preposition
at enjoying
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similarly
the scenery Add a comma
similarly,
gave
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had
positive
impact on Correct article usage
a positive
visitors
, which recorded 35%. The other two factors, culture and good accommodation each record 11% and 12%, and it is 3 times smaller than other factors that Use synonyms
gave
good impacts.Verb problem
had
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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