Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The Map pictures the sites that were presented by the

city

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planners where the shopping mall centre is going to be built.

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, both of the sites are near the railways and the road. The first

site

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is on the northern side of the

city

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on the other hand

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, the second

site

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is on the southern part of the

city

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. The first

site

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is going to be built near The Housing Estate close to The

City

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Centre.

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, it is close to the Golf Course and Park which is on the other side of the road. The shopping is going to be built just west of the river bank

that is

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crossing the entire town.

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, the second

site

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which is built in the southern part of the

city

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will be built near the industrial estate in the

city

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. It is near the crossroads just south of the

city

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centre.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

150 words

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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Government invest in sports is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent are you agree or disagree?

Tourism is a modern form of colonialism. It distorts local economies, causes environmental damage, ruins the places it exploits. To what extent do you agree?

Throughout history, people have dreamed to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how what the ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? What can people do to achieve an ideal society?

Nowadays children spend lots of time watching television and playing conputers games. However, it does not help in improving children's mental abilities do you agree or disagree.

Many museums charge for admission while orthers are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?