You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The Map pictures the sites that were presented by the
city
planners where the shopping mall centre is going to be built.
Overall
, both of the sites are near the railways and the road. The first site
is on the northern side of the city
, on the other hand
, the second site
is on the southern part of the city
.
The first site
is going to be built near The Housing Estate close to The City
Centre. Moreover
, it is close to the Golf Course and Park which is on the other side of the road. The shopping is going to be built just west of the river bank that is
crossing the entire town.
However
, the second site
which is built in the southern part of the city
will be built near the industrial estate in the city
. It is near the crossroads just south of the city
centre.Submitted by yukiko on
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