Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The Map pictures the sites that were presented by the

city

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planners where the shopping mall centre is going to be built.

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, both of the sites are near the railways and the road. The first

site

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is on the northern side of the

city

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on the other hand

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, the second

site

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is on the southern part of the

city

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. The first

site

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is going to be built near The Housing Estate close to The

City

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Centre.

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, it is close to the Golf Course and Park which is on the other side of the road. The shopping is going to be built just west of the river bank

that is

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crossing the entire town.

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, the second

site

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which is built in the southern part of the

city

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will be built near the industrial estate in the

city

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. It is near the crossroads just south of the

city

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centre.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Many people think modem communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.