The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the various steps in the generation of instant noodles. We can see that there are eight main steps in the process of instant ramen, from flour to selling to customers.
The manufacturing of instant noodles begins when a factory will collect flour in the storage silos.
Next,
mix flour with other ingredients such
as water and oil. It makes the lines tough and soft. At stage three, roll the lines through the roller machine including through dough sheets. Then
, take the dough and cut it into strips.
At
the fifth step shown on the diagram, The cut dough is extruded into circles by a noodle disc, which is fried in oil and dried to preserve it so that it can Change preposition
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longer. Next step, put it in a cup, add
vegetables and spices. Correct word choice
and add
Finally
, take the labels then
wrap Correct word choice
and then
it
, After that ready to export to convenience stores or Correct pronoun usage
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