A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sarah, I hope you're doing well. Long time no see since the
last
time we went to the cinema and long talk about the movie. I miss you so much to go again to watch a movie with you. Camping is a new
experiense
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experience
and would be
deffinetely
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definitely
different
with
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any other regular trips that you
had
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. You can not only fully relax and unwind
busy
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urban life, but
also
It would be the best opportunity to refresh and recharge your
energe
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energy
for
upcomming
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upcoming
heavy projects that you will have in the company. There would be some possible challenges you might face
such
as the lack of The Internet and you won't be able to make a video call with the family. Another problem is the limitation of the
aminities
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amenities
like hotel facilities like
lundry
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laundry
and a comfortable bed
for example
. I thoroughly like to come with you and if I can finish my current project on time before the summer, I would like to camp with you for a week. I would be glad if I
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further
help and I hope to see you again as soon as
podssible
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possible
. Javad,
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Grammar
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Task Achievement
Consider expanding on the disadvantages of camping to provide a fuller picture.
Task Achievement
The letter uses a friendly and personal tone, suitable for writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the topic, aiding readability.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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