A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Sarah,
I hope you're doing well. Long time no see since the
last
time we went to the cinema and long talk about the movie. I miss you so much to go again to watch a movie with you.
Camping is a new experiense
and would be Correct your spelling
experience
deffinetely
different Correct your spelling
definitely
with
any other regular trips that you Change preposition
from
had
. You can not only fully relax and unwind Wrong verb form
have
busy
urban life, but Change preposition
in busy
also
It would be the best opportunity to refresh and recharge your energe
for Correct your spelling
energy
upcomming
heavy projects that you will have in the company.
There would be some possible challenges you might face Correct your spelling
upcoming
such
as the lack of The Internet and you won't be able to make a video call with the family. Another problem is the limitation of the aminities
like hotel facilities like Correct your spelling
amenities
lundry
and a comfortable bed Correct your spelling
laundry
for example
.
I thoroughly like to come with you and if I can finish my current project on time before the summer, I would like to camp with you for a week.
I would be glad if I can
Wrong verb form
could
further
help and I hope to see you again as soon as podssible
.
Javad,Correct your spelling
possible
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Grammar
Try to avoid spelling mistakes and typos to increase clarity.
Task Achievement
Consider expanding on the disadvantages of camping to provide a fuller picture.
Task Achievement
The letter uses a friendly and personal tone, suitable for writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the topic, aiding readability.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,