You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
It is often argued that every type of
experimentation
on animals
should be banned whilst many others claim that animal's
experiments may be the engine for crucial scientific Change noun form
animal
leap
.Fix the agreement mistake
leaps
This
essay agrees with the fact that expermientation
on beasts is totally justified.A discussion about eventual alternatives will take place though.
Correct your spelling
experimentation
Experimentation
on animals
has always been present for centuries because animal
is considered beneath human Add an article
the animal
an animal
being
.Fix the agreement mistake
beings
However
, scientific experimentation
and act
of torture may be distinguished by the Fix the agreement mistake
acts
worldwild
population.Some Correct your spelling
world
indivuals
who claim defending Correct your spelling
individuals
animals
may target the bad treatment of animals
whereas
science aims to develop our
mankind's condition and cure deathly illnesses.Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
,many important medecines
were discovered on creatures Correct your spelling
medicines
such
as rats and pigs,because they feature similar characteristics than
humans.
Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, discoveries in neurology showcase that the genres of animal
that are subject to Fix the agreement mistake
animals
experimentation
can effectively feel pain, but does
not have any real feeling due Correct subject-verb agreement
do
the
undevelopment of a consequential part of the brain called " the hypophyse".
Despite the fact that many Change preposition
to the
desagree
with Correct your spelling
disagree
experimentation
on animals
, the truth is that, there is no reliable alternative to it. In fac
,the only option would Correct your spelling
fact
to
be to try medicines and chemical products on human Change the verb form
apply
beeing
itself,which is Correct your spelling
being
beings
unconceivable
. Ironically,Correct your spelling
inconceivable
same
cast of people who defend Change the article
the same
the
"animal's rights" are offended to hear some scandals related to the trying out of medicines on prisoners or on miserable Correct article usage
apply
african
Change the capitalization
African
population
. Fix the agreement mistake
populations
For instance
, according to
some BBC news reports, the COVID-19 vaccin
that Correct your spelling
vaccine
vaccines
were
innovated during the lockdown in 2020, has been tested on Correct subject-verb agreement
was
african
inhabitants.We can Change the capitalization
African
also
mention the experimentation
on prisoners in china
related by many serious international media.
In conclusion, Capitalize word
China
i
think that scientific Change the capitalization
I
try out
on Correct your spelling
tryouts
animals
is
completely and ineluctably Correct subject-verb agreement
are
jusified
for the simple reason that there is no better alternative yet.Human Correct your spelling
justified
beeing
should be the first concern of human Correct your spelling
being
beings
beeing
.Correct your spelling
being
beings
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