The maps below show the centre of a small town called lslip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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a tiny
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development
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town
centre
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development
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planned
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the planned
development
such
as new residential, car park shopping centre
and bus station .
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development,
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, in addition,
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there are two housing in lsilp town
centre
now.
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the lsilp
lsilp
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the planned
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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