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The charts show the share of global manufacturing and exports for four countries between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the share of global manufacturing and exports for four countries between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide key information about the world's manufacturing exports for lots of countries between the years 1980 to 2005. And divided into six sections,
services
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, manufacturing, materials, info-com tech,
agriculture
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, and energy.
Overall
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, there are no major differences between chart one and chart two.
According to
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 what is shown, in 1980 the highest to the lowest were in order,
services
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, manufacturing, info-com tech, energy,
agriculture
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, and materials. After 25 years it changed to become,
services
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 in the first place, and
agriculture
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 in the
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 place.
Nevertheless
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, in 1980, most exports came from
services
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 at 40 per cent, and manufacturing at 31 per cent and
this
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 is approximately more than two-thirds of the total output. In 2005, these two sections remained unchanged, with a little bit more increase.
However
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, if we want to speak about the other sections, we will find that there are lots of changes.
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,
agriculture
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, and energy declined compared to 25 years ago.
In addition
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, materials, and info-com tech were increased to become 20%, with 3 per cent more than the other chart.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words services, agriculture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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