The graph below shows the numbe of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The line graph gives information about how many shops shut down and new shops opened in a country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, there are so much
Correct quantifier usage
many
flctuations
in numbers for store opening Correct your spelling
fluctuations
fluctuation
as well as
closing. Over the past 7 years, the closure of store was very low only at once whereas
the beginning was maintained at a close level of differences.
From the figure, it is clear that
the stores was
closed in 2015 below 1000 and in the year 2013 the highest number of Change the verb form
were
closing
was found. In 2011, more than 8000 new outlets had started their business and Fix the agreement mistake
closings
conversely
around 6500 shopers stopped doing Add a comma
conversely,
further
dealings. At the end
of 2018, only 3000 markets were launched but at the same year
approximately 5100 shops shut down their trading. Add a comma
year,
Furthermore
, the point at which both closings and openings were almost closed
to each other took place in 2014.Replace the word
close
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