The graph below shows the numbe of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The line graph gives information about how many shops shut down and new shops opened in a country from 2011 to 2018.

Overall

, there are so

much

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many

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flctuations

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in numbers for store opening

as well as

closing. Over the past 7 years, the closure of store was very low only at once

whereas

the beginning was maintained at a close level of differences. From the figure,

it is clear that

the stores

was

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were

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closed in 2015 below 1000 and in the year 2013 the highest number of

closing

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closings

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was found. In 2011, more than 8000 new outlets had started their business and

conversely

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conversely,

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around 6500 shopers stopped doing

further

dealings.

At the end

of 2018, only 3000 markets were launched but at the same

year

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year,

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approximately 5100 shops shut down their trading.

Furthermore

, the point at which both closings and openings were almost

closed

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close

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to each other took place in 2014.