Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others contest those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

In some countries, the

governments

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do not place importance on observing and controlling the design and

costructions

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construction

constructions

of homes and apartments.

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the buildings were designed and structured by only

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the owners

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owners

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owners'

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decision

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decisions

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. I believe that

the

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apply

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governments

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should introduce strict rules for

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important decisions. On the one hand, some of the owners might

do

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not consider all of the necessary conditions

,

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and only think about making money. There are several matters that they should consider.

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, For the safety of the residents, they must use

the

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apply

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high

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high-quality

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quality

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materials, especially, in the base of

structure

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the structure

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.

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, the designers should pay attention to

shape

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the shape

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of all of the buildings in the whole

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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and their design should not

be

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apply

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vary from other houses.

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, in a cultural area, a modern skyscraper would make a bad impression.

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, I believe that the

governments

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are responsible for

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issue. They can recruit some experts in

city

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designing

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design

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and introduce effective rules. The owner not only can make a

high

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high-quality

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quality

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building but

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make the relevant decisions. It is very important that all of the buildings of a

city

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have the same

quality

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and

have

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apply

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a

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harmony.

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, the

city

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has become odd and ugly. In

concolusio

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conclusion

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governments

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government's

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responsibility

for controlling

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to control

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the design and structure of new houses and make the

city

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more

convinient

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convenient

for their citizens.

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, they should observe the

quality

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of materials for the safety of residents. In

this

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case

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case,

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we could live in a better

city

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.