some cities , public parks and pen spaces changed to garden for local people to grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think is benefits more than disantages?

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start

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to change the public parks and open areas to gardens , let

people

can

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grow

the

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food

,

such

as

fruit

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fruits

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and

vegetables

. I think

this

idea will cause out great benefit than the disadvantages. For the first

point

, it can be more health. The local

people

can choose the positive way to grow their own

fruit

and

vegetables

, adding

the

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healthy fertiliser, like

the

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eggshells and great soil.

Reduse

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Reduce

the worry about the

food

are

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adding some bad elements for

grow

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which are selling outside.

Second

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point

, it can be more suitable

to

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people

.

People

can choose to grow what kind of

fruit

and

vegetables

, it can link to their

hobits

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habits

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and favour.

Such

as the sports

peolpe

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people

can grow some

vegetables

and

fruit

for making

joices

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juices

juice

and

salas

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sales

Salas

, growing

strewberries

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strawberries

who love it.

Poeple

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People

can have more

chose

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to choose

.

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point

, it can earn money by selling

own

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its own

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grow

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fruit

and

vegetables

. After the

fruit

and

vegetables

are

grew

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, the local

people

can sell them to each other and even the visitors.

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a

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example from

china

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, some

poeple

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people

will sell their own

grow

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goods

at

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in

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the centre of the city,

such

as near the market,

those

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produces

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will be

more

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cheaper than the

produces

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sell

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at the shopping market. And the

sell

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point

is ' organic own grow

vegetables

and

fruit

'. The

last

point

is local

people

can eat

the

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fresh

friut

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fruit

fruits

and

vegetables

by getting

at

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their gardens. They can get the

food

when they want to eat.

Because sometimes

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we put the

fruit

and

vegetables

at home for a long time after

bougth

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buying

them, the reason is ready the

food

frist

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first

for

futher

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further

want to eat and can buy it. To sum

of

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above points, we can see that it

bring

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out many advantages, are benefit

the

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people

's daily

live

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. They can eat the fresh

fruit

and

vegrtables

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vegetables

which are growing.