The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents the fluctuating
house
prices
in five cities from 1990 and 1995 compared with the
prices
from 1996 to 2002.
First,
there were two opposite trends in the
house
prices
in the four big cities. In 1990, Tokyo and London's
house
prices
changed the most as they went down by 6% from the normal price. New York houses'
also
declined by 5%.
However
, Madrid and Frankfurt had an increase because Madrid's
prices
had a rise of 2%,
while
Frankfurt had risen by 3%. From 1996 to 2002, the average of
house
prices
were increasing. London’s
prices
sharply went up to 12%, followed by New York’s with a rise of 5%, and Madrid’s 4%. Meanwhile, Frankfurt’s
prices
had declined by 1% compared to a decade before.
However
, in Tokyo, it was still below average with a percentage of 5%.
To sum up
,
house
prices
tended to decline before encountering a significant increase in
house
prices
from 1996 to 2002.
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