The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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percentage

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of

household

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that owned electrical appliances and the number of hours of

housework

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,

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as washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning per week from 1920 to 2019. The data is calibrated in both numbers and

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percentage

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features with relevant comparisons

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.

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, it can be observed that as the

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household

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with electrical appliances rose, the amount of time people spent doing

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decreased per week during the period between 1920 and 2019.

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with, the

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of refrigerator

owner

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increase

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over

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time and rocketed to 90% in 1960, which

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surge

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at 100% for the rest of the period. Afterwards, having a vacuum cleaner was slightly the same. 30% of households had a vacuum cleaner cleaner in 1920, yet after experiencing a sufficient rise, 100% of them owned one in 2000.

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analysing the paragraph, owning a washing machine rose gradually till 1960 and

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it dipped in 1989 and

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to grow till 2019. Moving ahead to the

housework

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, in 1920 average

housework

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per week

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approximately 50 hours per household.

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, as advanced gadgets

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to

became

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popular, the average work diminishes and

reach

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at

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apply

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just 10 hours

weekly

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work.