The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the
number
of global cell
phone
sales
of the top five mobile phone
companies (Samsung
, Apple, Nokia, LG, and ZTE) from 2009 to 2013 (in millions).
Overall
, Samsung
and Apple have an upward trend over the period. ZTE had a positive trend for over a half decade
. Add a hyphen
half-decade
In contrast
, Nokia and LG have a downward trend between 2009 and 2013.
In the first year
, Samsung
comprised at
around 250 Change preposition
apply
million
then
it increased roughly
100 Change preposition
to roughly
million
, which stood at above 300 million
in 2011. In the final year
, the number
of cell
phone
sales
by Samsung
rose sharply, which
remained at about 450 Correct word choice
and
million
. At the beginning of the period, Apple made up above 0 million
. Afterwards, it stepped up significantly in
each Change preposition
apply
year
. At the end
of the period, it stayed over 100 million
. Moreover
, ZTE comprised approximately 50 million
in 2009. Until 2009, it expanded minimally in 2011. The
final Change preposition
In the
year
, it remained at around 65 million
.
On the other hand
, the number
of cell
phone
sales
by Nokia stood at under 500 millions
in 2009. Between 2011 and 2013, it decreased swiftly each Change to singular
million
year
. As a result
, the number
of mobile phone
sales
stayed at
below 300 Change preposition
apply
million
in 2013. Similarly
, in 2009, the number
of LG cell
phone
sales
made up at over 100 million
then
it reduced slightly in each year
, which remained roughly 50 million
in 2013.Submitted by Tiger23
on
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