The chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and and make comparisons where relevant.
The following line graph depicts the changes that occurred in 3 different types of illegal activity in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
,during the whole period, robbery seemed to be the lowest offence that occurred whilst burglary and car theft were alternatively, the most common crimes.
Looking at closer detail to the chart, the rating of burglary was the highest in 2003 accounting for almost 3500 incidents.At the same time, car theft was the second most committed misdeed with a rating of approximately 2800 cases.Linking Words
In contrast
, thieves were the lower outlaws. Indeed, just more than 500 cases of the aforementioned offence were recorded.
During the following years, Roobery's rating evolved steadily featuring some oscillations, without ever going beyond 1000 incidents. Linking Words
However
, Robbery crime collapsed dramatically, passing from more than 3500 to less than 1500 incidents between 2006 and 2007.Linking Words
Furthermore
, the same time span witnessed a surge in car theft after a drop during the previous years.Linking Words
As a result
, the latter outstanded the crime rating in 2003 .Linking Words
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