The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The pie chart illustrates the seven types of spending (food,
cars
, petrol,
restaurants
, furniture, computers, and
books
) in 1996 by American citizens.
Overall
, the largest
proportion
was
cars
. the second biggest
proportion
was
foods
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food
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and
restaurants
. The third largest
proportion
was computers.
In contrast
, the smallest ratio
was
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was booked
was booking
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books
. On the one hand, the ratio of
cars
made up at around 45% which was more than foods and
restaurants
at about 31% and more than
computures
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computers
at around 35% in 1996. The second largest was
foods
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food
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and
restaurants
. It remained roughly 14% in both
category
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which was less than
cars
at around 31%.
Moreover
, the
proportion
of computers stayed at approximately 10% which is less than
cars
at around 35%.
On the other hand
, the ratio of petrol and furniture comprised approximately 8% which was greater than
books
at about 7%. The smallest
proportion
was
books
which stood at below 2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, restaurants, books, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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