The table gives information about marriages in Australia from 1960 to 2000.

The table gives information about marriages in Australia from 1960 to 2000.
The presents data on
marriages
in Australia from 1960 to 2000, categorizing them into religious and civil
marriages
and indicating the average ages of brides and bridegrooms. Between 1960 and 2000, religious
marriages
consistently outnumbered civil
marriages
, though their numbers declined over time. In 1960, there were 42,000 religious
marriages
and only 8,000 civil
marriages
. By 2000, religious
marriages
reduced to 36,000,
while
civil
marriages
increased to 40,000, surpassing religious ones for the first time. The average age of both brides and bridegrooms increased significantly over the decades. In 1960, brides were, on average, 21 years old, and bridegrooms were 23 years old. By 2000, these ages rose to 30 and 31 years, respectively, reflecting a trend toward later marriage.
Overall
, the data indicate a shift from religious to civil
marriages
and a rising trend in the age at which people marry.
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