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The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams compare data about how many
people
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 had various edges and sexes and different educations in Glasgow in 2010.
Overall
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, it was important that most of the elderly
people
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 do not have academic education;
moreover
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, the order of each fraction was the same in
both
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 genders, and the no qualification had the main section.
According to
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 the bar chart, a University degree, the most common among young adults, hit 76 for young adults, and it reached the same number at 71 for
both
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 teenagers and
people
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 between 35 and 50 years old;
then
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 it reduced from 50 to 25 from
people
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 between 50 to 75 and more than 75. School certificates touched the same figure for teenagers and
people
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 between 35 to 75;
thereafter
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, the population whose ages were 24 to 35 recorded 15 and
people
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 who were more than 75 scored 3.
In contrast
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 to other sections in no qualification,
people
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 who are more than 75 reported 72 after that
people
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 between 50 and 75 hit 30, and other ages reached 9. The pie graphs demonstrate no qualification, the most common section among
both
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 sexes, formed 38% for women and 35% for men; the next one was school certification;
additionally
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, in
this
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 part,
both
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 males and females composed the same percentage at nearly one-third. The
last
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 one was University degrees;
furthermore
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, males constituted 32% and 3% more than women.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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