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The bar chart provides data on the number of biths given per woman in 6 Gulf countries in 2 seperate years 1990 and 2000.

The bar chart provides data on the number of biths given per woman in 6 Gulf countries in 2 seperate years 1990 and 2000.
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The bar graph illustrates details on the number of childbirths for each female in 6 bight nations in 2 distinct years 1990 and 2000.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the aggregate of women
births
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 in 1990 was more than in 2000.
According to
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 the information presented, in 1990, the topmost figure of
births
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 per woman country was formidably in
Oman
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 (7
Births
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),
whereas
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, the least was in Kuwait and Bahrain, with exceeding 3 for both.
In addition
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, Qatar was nowhere near as enormous as
Oman
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, with almost 4 compared to 7
births
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 for each woman respectively.
Moreover
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, the
quantity
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 of
births
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 per female in Saudi Arabia was not as few as in the UAE (roughly 7 and nearly 4). In 2000, the highest number of
births
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 given per female was in
Oman
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 and Saudi Arabia (more than 5),
while
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, the lowest was in Bahrain (surpassing 2).
Furthermore
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, Kuwait was not as high as Qatar, with approximately 3 against beyond 3.
Additionally
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, the UAE (around 3) was nowhere near as massive as Saudi Arabia and
Oman
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 (exceeding 5).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words births, oman with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • fertility rate
  • Gulf countries
  • economic development
  • social policies
  • healthcare improvements
  • population growth
  • decade
  • significant change
  • trend analysis
  • implications
  • variation
  • consistency
  • population dynamics
  • demographic changes
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