The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict how the layout of the school has changed from 1985 until the present day.
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Overall
, it is obvious that the school has become more educational and modern, expanding its infrastructure with the introduction of several classrooms, and fitness centre and a pool. It is Linking Words
also
evident that the number of students has increased over the ensuing years.
•In 1985, entrance and exit ways were situated on the two corners of the north side and surrounded the car park, lying straight towards the playing fields, which were located at the bottom of the picture. Linking Words
Next,
on the right side of the middle road, there was a classroom block with two storeys. The car park and other classrooms occupied the left part of the road, Linking Words
while
there was a big library, adjacent to which was an office.
•At present, entrance and exit sectors, and an office have remained intact; Linking Words
however
, the hugest facility – the playing field has shrunk in size, which resulted in the appearance of a pool, fitness centre, and classrooms. Linking Words
Furthermore
, on the right angle, an additional floor has been added to the classroom, and the third classroom has been constructed as well. Turning to the upper side, the library has been replaced by a learning resources centre and a computer room, Linking Words
whereas
the way has disappeared around the car parkLinking Words
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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