The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the intended length of stay of
immigrants
in the UK, from 2000 to 2008 and the pie chart illustrates the causes of movement in 2008.
Overall
, it is evident that the number of settlers who planned to stay for up to 2 years
and 2 to 4 years
experienced a gradual increase, while
the figure for those intending to stay for 4 or more years
remained relatively stable over the given period. Furthermore
, the majority of immigrants
traveled
to the UK for work or study, Change the spelling
travelled
while
the smallest proportion stated no reason
or gave another reason
.
Looking in more, the count of immigrants
aiming to remain for 2 to 4 years
was almost 50k in 2000,
and changed gradually by 2006. Remove the comma
apply
However
, this
pattern for those tend
to stay up to 2 Correct pronoun usage
who tend
years
commenced with approximately 150k in 2001, followed a
significant increase to 250k by 2004, and stabilized until the end of the period.Change preposition
by a
Additionally
, the number of immigrants
who prefer live
2 to 4 Fix the infinitive
to live
years
observed a slight growth by
about 100k.The number of Change preposition
of
immigrants
intending to settle for 4 or more years
started at around 150,000 in 2000 and fluctuated until 2008.
Regarding the causes, work and study was
the most given Correct subject-verb agreement
were
reason
, with 38% and 32%, respectively. Another obvious reason
was accompany
and Wrong verb form
accompanying
join
family almost 16%. Wrong verb form
joining
Morever
, the percentages of the other reasons and no reasons were almost the same, with 7%.Correct your spelling
Moreover
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Vocabulary: Replace the words immigrants, years, reason, k with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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